Originally posted by deteq:alot of people when they think of greed will think of robbers and thieves all this. no have other thing to talk about meh? i think for first 5 min on greed then i give up go write teenager.
I write about a man who gambled, screw up, did crime, get caught.
I wrote on greed, but expoisitory. =/
Originally posted by iamapebble:I wrote on greed, but expoisitory. =/
like?
i now is confirm can pass but dunno whether can score or not.
for my standard, i b3 i sibeh happy liao.
Originally posted by deteq:i now is confirm can pass but dunno whether can score or not.
for my standard, i b3 i sibeh happy liao.
Just don't underestimate yourself. You'll be surprised.
Started with a short story about how a handicapped lady was begging me for food and I happened to have some leftover bread, so I offered her the bread. As days went by, it's as if I was obliged to giving her food and finally after 1 week she told me, "do you have anything else other than bread because my daughter and I are sick of eating bread already."
Then I started my expository with things like: We may shake our heads in digust at the lady in the story, but then it is our human nature for us to be greedy. Without greed, we would not have a comfortable life etc etc etc.
And ended off with something like: It is not wrong to be greedy as long as we use our greed as a pushing force for us to become better persons, just like how I am greedy for high marks for this composition.
I'm sure that examiners would found the topic Greed cliche. My friends did about gambling too, ended up losing evrytg includg his father- i think. I did no5
Originally posted by iamapebble:Started with a short story about how a handicapped lady was begging me for food and I happened to have some leftover bread, so I offered her the bread. As days went by, it's as if I was obliged to giving her food and finally after 1 week she told me, "do you have anything else other than bread because my daughter and I are sick of eating bread already."
Then I started my expository which things like: We may shake our heads in digust at the lady in the story, but then it is our human nature for us to be greedy. Without greed, we would not have a comfortable life etc etc etc.And ended off with something like: It is not wrong to be greedy as long as we use our greed as a pushing force for us to become better persons, just like how I am greedy for high marks for this composition.
Lol not bad. I ended with " Only then did he realised how greed had reduced a man to nothingness. " Quite of crappy lol.
wah all so model essays de.
i only crap in my essay.
Ah well, it's over! Amaths tomorrow, gambatte people. :D
Originally posted by iamapebble:Ah well, it's over! Amaths tomorrow, gambatte people. :D
Amaths prepared?
yay tmr amaths !!! my fav. topic !
Originally posted by wishboy:yay tmr amaths !!! my fav. topic !
Your favourite, not mine :P
i dont know whether i should go for amath tomorrow.
i hopeless case in amath. anyway i got emath and poa.
but i think i should go see how difficult. if really sure fail then dont go paper 2 lol.
i wonder how would de a math paper be like hope it is not too difficult....
haha...
guys, i wrote on greed & i think i wrote out of point, i say there was a friend of mine who out of greed to be the top scorer for the EOY went to steal the exam answer sheet & was caught.
it that greed??? shit lar i wna to pass my english with at least B4...
Originally posted by Thumb-drive:guys, i wrote on greed & i think i wrote out of point, i say there was a friend of mine who out of greed to be the top scorer for the EOY went to steal the exam answer sheet & was caught.
it that greed??? shit lar i wna to pass my english with at least B4...
Not out of point. Greedy for marks.
i wrote ques 3...i wrote tat i saw sth funny in my dream tat actually happened later in the day den i burst out in laughter while my teacher was scolding me....its not out of pt rite?
Originally posted by xteehee:i wrote ques 3...i wrote tat i saw sth funny in my dream tat actually happened later in the day den i burst out in laughter while my teacher was scolding me....its not out of pt rite?
No. Laughing while being scolded is laughing at an imappropiate place/time.
haha thx....hope i could get at least a b3...
well kinda happy tat english is finally over
Originally posted by MyNameisNas:I'm sure that examiners would found the topic Greed cliche. My friends did about gambling too, ended up losing evrytg includg his father- i think. I did no5
How did you go about doing qn5?
i wrote on laugh controlbly
but out of point lar, i added a twist, basically i saw my fren car accident, i open the door see him alive, then i laugh cos very happy so laugh, but he died eventually, and his parents came at the wrong time and tot i was laughing at his dead son
good game lar
pawn i duno lar, i tink they wan to pwn us
duno gt out of point or not
i dont tink got out of point bah...cause it seem lyk an inappropriate time to laugh...
wats another word for gnarled?
when i write teenagers, i dont know how to start. is it can introduce to reader about teenager, then next para then start on the good and bad points